tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9896011.post3758179103425170983..comments2023-05-18T07:01:53.943-06:00Comments on In My Little World: Book Tour--Cyndere's Midnight--Day3Valerie Comerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06674882711125123089noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9896011.post-38005108987904679272009-02-23T14:39:00.000-07:002009-02-23T14:39:00.000-07:00Val,Good insight, especially the discussion of the...Val,<BR/>Good insight, especially the discussion of the opening line. I like the swimming pool analogy especially. <BR/><BR/>I have one point of contention - I took the prologue with Auralia as something that happened before the Cataclysm, not current with the timeline in the book.<BR/><BR/>Good thoughts, thanks for sharing!<BR/>JasonJasonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18363518142334125056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9896011.post-27022233962567812562009-02-19T18:49:00.000-07:002009-02-19T18:49:00.000-07:00I cannot wait to read it.I cannot wait to read it.chrisdhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00662811240806616921noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9896011.post-67059345503618043462009-02-19T07:28:00.000-07:002009-02-19T07:28:00.000-07:00I REALLY liked that opening line as well. It grab...I REALLY liked that opening line as well. It grabbed me. And you're right, it was enough to push me through the backstory. But just enough.<BR/><BR/>Good insight!Robert Treskillardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17767228138541201198noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9896011.post-83021349235093890342009-02-18T15:05:00.000-07:002009-02-18T15:05:00.000-07:00Lots of writing stuff to think about in your posts...Lots of writing stuff to think about in your posts, Val. I have to admit, I thought the opening was slow. I hadn't taken the time to analyze, so wasn't thinking, Ah-ha, backstory. But perhaps that was exactly why I wasn't fully engaged. I'd say it took a good hundred pages before I felt pulled into the story.<BR/><BR/>BeckyRebecca LuElla Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06823550402103559922noreply@blogger.com