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Maybe we call this editing. I'm never sure how to define the difference between editing, revising, and rewriting, but I believe I met a rewrite when I was last working on False Perceptions. At least I threw away vast chunks of story and rewrote them. This, however...what I'm doing these days to Marks of Repentance is fairly minor in comparison. Not sure if I'm simply blind to the story's problems...or if it is truly that brilliant! :P Yeah, well. Critiquers will be sure to put me in my place.