Here's Randy with *The Canadian Contingent*

We also had individual critiques on five pages (which we'd sent in ahead of time). I've found a few good ideas to tweak up the opening scene of Quest to Be Queen, thanks to the discussion with Randy.

Good times. Now I have a few days to re-group before heading out to Victoria.
2 comments:
Well, if *he's* given you advice on the first five pages, that means I can skip those in my crit, right?
Glad you had a great time!
LOL, nice try Erin. NO. I need your great wisdom, too, because he hasn't read the rest of the book and you will have. Right? ;;)
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